As Americans we strive for change in
hopes issues like race and immigration can be pushed aside. What exactly is the right
terminology? What exactly is the wrong terminology? (Real Question) It all depends on the perspectives people portray
on other people. By digging deeper into the history of racial issues America
has succeeded to change. I
feel that the arguments in the article all have valid points when dealing with
race and immigration and proper terminology amongst ones racial background.(Simple sentence with compounded verbs
connected with ands) For example Rev. Jesse Jackson makes a clear statement
saying, “Every ethnic group in this country has a reference to some land base,
some historical cultural base. African-Americans have hit that level of
cultural maturity.”
Demographics
have shifted when dealing with race, the ideas of race and immigration have
changed context for the meanings of words like African-American and
Black-American,
HOWEVER, by making arguments like who is allowed to use
those words or why they are allowed to use it just sends America flying
backwards in time. (Use “however”
in a correctly punctuated sentence)&(One Sentence Paragraph)
When examining the terms of “African-
American” and “Black American,” we justify that they are two classifications
describing an external feature of a human being. In my opinion, the analysis of
these words cuts deeper than just external features. To many Americans today,
the term “Black” is used in such a broad racial manner. It is extremely hard for a society built on
different class levels to be able to understand and analyze such critical terms
of what is the difference between “African-American” and “Black American.” (Long Sentence, punctuated correctly)
Given that our country has gone through different contexts of these words it is
hard to maintain a balance. I believe that in a public setting people should be
educated with these terms. African
American or Black American-they are American. (Dash to emphasize the last element of a sentence) Whether their
past shows hardships in this country or not, we should all be treated equally,
with equal opportunity. They are an American citizen for a reason, being
American. Do we really
need to repeat the past to figure out that we are all created equally? (Rhetorical question)
Ethnic labels are thrown out in American
society everywhere with every race. Abdulaziz Kamus even wonders what ethnic
label defines his own self in America. I agree with him because he brings up
the concern for what is defined as African American in this country and what is
not. He states that he is African, he is an American citizen, and he should consider
himself an African-American. It makes sense; and he doesn’t dig deeper into the
meaning of his own race. He states that if he walks down the street white
people would see him as an African-American, not think about his family roots
200 years ago. As much as it pains for me to say it, Americans perceive other
Americans externally firsthand, not internally. Alan Keys brings up the definition of
African-American differently. It should be used for only those whose families
that endured the hardships during American slavery and segregation. That, I don’t agree with.
(Short Sentence)Whether it being
black family descents of slaves from the US or black immigrants, Barack Obama
makes a clear point to ethnic labels. They share greater similarities THAN differences even
through all the hardships. (Then
and Than)
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